Friday 2 August 2019

The Silver Chalice or how not to write a novel.

How chalice started
I started writing in July of last year. As I mentioned in a previous post, I wrote only two short stories and a poem for a competition. I was in love!  After a lifetime of daydreaming, there are hundreds of stories in my head; I was relieved to get some of them on paper.

My friend Jackie, who had also entered the same competition, suggested we do NaNoWriMo. After some explanation and a bit of internet research, I agreed to join her so we could support each other. How hard can it be? I thought to myself.

NaNo started in November and as it was then the end of July, I had three months before it started. What I should have done next is plan my novel,  what I actually did was research ways to get my unwritten novel published. I discovered the possibilities of self-publishing via Amazon. What a good idea I thought. What I should have done next is plan my novel. What I actually did was write a practice piece to find out how the publishing process worked. And that’s how chalice was born; it was my practice piece. The first version was terrible. It was a murder mystery, but I couldn’t bring myself to kill anyone even on paper, so a murder mystery with no murder. I realised then, that If I was going to write the real thing in November; I had better learn something about writing. Every time I found out something new, I changed Chalice.

Of course, when November came around, I had nothing more than a title for the novel I was about to write because I should have spent my time planning. I only managed 35,000 words, a fail in NaNo land but an achievement for me. I discovered that I was on a learning curve so steep that I needed ropes and climbing shoes. I finished the first draft of Pilgrim, my Nano book, in March. Of course, by then I had lots of new knowledge, so I rewrote Chalice yet again. I still considered it to be a practice piece, although, I had published it on Amazon by then. To cut a long story short, Chalice was being changed either every few weeks or whenever I learnt a new skill. There came a point a couple of months ago when I realised I had put so much work into it that I didn’t really want to scrap it as soon as Pilgrim was ready. I also had, had an idea for a sequel featuring one of the minor characters. I have now written the first draft of that sequel.

Where did the story come from?

The advice that everyone gives you is ‘write about what you know’. Well, my life isn’t interesting enough to give me much help. However, I decided I would set the story in a church in Derby so that at least I would be in familiar surroundings. I lived and went to church there for so many years. I read somewhere that I was the right age and gender for cosy mysteries so I decided that that’s what I would write. I have read quite a few, so I thought that should help.

What I did not understand is, most of the people who successfully self- publish already have some of the necessary skills. Sometimes they have been writing for years and have been traditionally published, sometimes they have been writing for years and have not been published, but have gotten better with every book. Sometimes they have been in a related profession, journalism, editing or publishing, and sometimes they have enough money to buy help at every stage.

In a way, I’m glad that I didn’t know that or I might have given up by now because the answer to the question, How hard can it be? Is very hard. After spending two days trying to work out how to make a Facebook post that looks attractive, I am frustrated but no further forward. Creating a cover for the paperback actually made me cry with frustration.

The Silver Chalice is finished, though. It does have a real murder; it does have clues, and it has been edited by a real person other than me. I won’t make any more changes unless you or another reader finds a mistake and emails me to tell me. The paperback is finished and is available to buy. The kindle version may be available or not because I appear to have broken Amazon. I have published it and unpublished it so many times that I have caused a glitch in the system. They assure me it will be all right and I believe them.

It is available here;
 Amazon.com.
 Amazon.co.uk
 Amazon.es

It is fairly short, a novella rather than a full novel so it won’t take you too long to read, but it’s long enough to be worthwhile. I hope that you will buy it and enjoy it. If you enjoy it, please review it on Amazon.

What's next?

Death of a Pilgrim is with the editor and should be available in a few weeks. The Book of Medicinal Herbs should be ready a few weeks after that. Then I start again, but this time I will be better prepared!

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2 comments:

  1. What a fantastic blog. I truly understand the processes you're talking about. I think I also understand why you chose to do the things you did instead of planning. LOL x Oh and happy writing anniversary.

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  2. You've certainly come a long way in a short space of time. Well done.

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